读后续写舞台表演类MrsSally鼓励我表演讲义高考英语作文复习专项

原文呈现：

In the first and second grades, I was extremely shy. I had friends, but it just wasn’t in

my personality to be very outgoing, even if I knew someone well. I was even quieter

with strangers, and so I wasn’t very good at meeting new people. I was afraid that I

would do or say something wrong.

So in our school’s annual grand play, I usually sat in a secluded (僻静的) corner to

watch the performance alone. I hoped to sit in the background and watch the actors

sweat in front of all those pairs of eyes.

One day in the third grade, my teacher Mrs. Sally called me into her office and said,

“Oh, Mary, you’re great at memorizing things, and you have such a sweet personality.

Perfect for Jenny!” But I bowed my head and dared not speak. The teacher saw this

and then said, “Of course, plenty of girls would love the role, and 1 could find

somebody else. But I hope you could try it for me. I had you in mind for Jenny while

writing the play! If you really don’t want to, I won’t force you. It’s your choice.”

My mind was spinning faster than the windmill(风车) on the school playground.

Mrs. Sally, whom I loved and admired, wanted me to play this role. She believed in

me. My eyes moved across the room to a poster I had never noticed before. It showed

a shooting star and read, “If you reach for the stars, you might at least grab a piece of

the moon.” I looked into Mrs. Sally’s shining blue eyes and said, “Okay, I’ll try.” I

realized it was time to throw off my shy mask and show the world who I really was.

In the following five months, the teacher taught me how to set, put on makeup,

memorize lines, create costumes and so on. Gradually, I mastered my lines and songs.

Paragraph 1：The big day came at last.

Paragraph 2：At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final checkup and

noticed my nervousness.

下水作文：

The big day came at last. Given that I had got well prepared for the annual grand

play after five months of professional training from the teacher, I stepped confidently

to the back of the stage. With Mrs. Sally’s encouraging words still circling in my

mind, I had the faith that I could make it today. Standing behind the curtains, I

still memorized the lines and practiced songs, imagining myself acting on the stage.

However, the warmingup music, the flashing stage lights and the cheering audience

all brought me back to reality. And the realization threw me into a sea of nervousness

again. 98

At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final checkup and noticed my

nervousness. Gathering me into her arms, she forted me that I would certainly bring

the best out in the performance with so much practice. Encouraged and relieved, I was

ready. Now came our show time. The next 15 minutes witnessed our

amazing performance, everyone immersed in the role and I totally forgetting my

nervousness. When the play ended with our bow of thanks, the hall exploded with

thunderous applause, indicating that we had made it. My classmates and friends came

gathering around me, congratulating me on the success. But best of all, the

expereience helped me throw off my shy mask, leading the shy girl onto the path to

being outgoing. 110

文章大意：

I used to be an extremely shy experience for school's annual grand play.

One day in the third grade, my teacher Mrs. Sally encouraged me to act a popular role

Jenny.

screwed /plucked/mustered up my courage to play the role and determined to

challenge myself. With the help of .I gradually mastered my lines and songs.

Write for plot

Paragraph 1: The big day came at last.

O1:How did I feel before the performance ?

Q2: What did I think of? What did I do?

Paragraph 2:At that time Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final checkup and

noticed my nervousness.

Ql: What was 's reaction to my nervousness ?

Q2: How did I play the role? How did I feel ?

Q3: How about the final performance?How did I feel then?

Q4: How can you design the ending more appealing and meaningful?

语言积累：

1.被紧张充满，我感觉心跳加快，以至于喉咙发紧，膝盖发软,我的手紧紧地抓住

我的戏服。Seized/Consumed/Overe/overwhelmed by a surge of nervousness, felt

my heart was pounding so wildly that my throat tightened, my knees felt weak and my

hands grabbed/squeezed my costume tightly.

2.（倒装）我一复习台词一阵紧张感让我脸更红

Hardly had I reviewed my lines when a flush of nervousness deepened the red of

my cheeks.

3. （独立主格）我深呼吸，开始复习台词，手抖得厉害/手心冒汗

I took a deep breath and started to review the lines, my hands quivering violently

sweating.

4. 回想过去五个月的训练，我似乎对自己有了信心。( 现在分词作状语 look back

on...)

Looking back on the five months of practice, I seemed to have confidence in myself.

5. 我一路小跑到学校大厅的后台。 (jog / trot)

I jogged all the way to the backstage of the school hall.

6. 我找到内心深处一个真正的自我，一个深藏很久的更加勇敢和外向的我(同位

语，定语从句)

I found a new person inside me, a much more daring and outgoing person who had

been hidden all along.

7. 然而，我正准备上台作，这时，我几乎要晕倒，脑海一片空白。(be about to do

)

However, I was about to go on stage when I felt almost fainted and my mind went

blank.

参考范文：

The big day came at last. I jogged all the way to the backstage of the school hall.

Cameras were lighting up in all directions. Looking back on the five months of

practice, I seemed to have confidence in myself. I found a new person inside me, a

much more daring and outgoing person who had been hidden all along. However,

when I was about to go on stage, my heart was pounding so hard that my throat

tightened and my knees felt weak.

At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final checkup and noticed my

nervousness. “It doesn’t matter how you do tonight,”she said. “You’ve already shown

how wonderful you are.” Looking into Mrs. Sally’s shining blue eyes, I calmed down

and then walked onto the stage with his warm words like a ray of sunshine. When I

finished my performance, the audience burst into applause. The scene made me feel

myself floating in an ocean of happiness. It dawned on me that it was the

encouragement from my teacher, that helped me find the confidence to succeed.